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    LadyHawk
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    Post by LadyHawk Tue Apr 02, 2013 2:22 am

    DPA CRAZY!!! I entered this for that story contest DP is having. Please post anything that falls under Arts (story parts, poetry, art-art, etc.) here.

    The Frontier-A Ballad

    The land wild and rich with danger,
    Beholds the one who dares to tread.
    Enter the land a tempered archer,
    Who moves forward in hope's stead.

    All anew, their eyes dost say,
    That they witness such majesty.
    They walk the entirety of the day,
    Thier purpose not one borne of fallacy.

    The encounter with a terrible beast,
    Whose' hide is made of hardened skin.
    A trained hand is needed at least,
    When drawing back the string to chin.

    Let loose the flying arrowhead,
    to distract the nightmare's terror.
    Grab the reins and remember once said,
    Hold tight, tame with minimal error.

    The rage soon to fade away,
    A bond of companionship is forged.
    The meaning the Frontier does underlay,
    Welcome, Prophets born of land old scorched.
    nightwave19
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    Post by nightwave19 Wed Apr 03, 2013 9:11 am

    With this im sure ur gona win..i mean its just too good.. What a Face [b][i]
    LadyHawk
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    Post by LadyHawk Wed Apr 03, 2013 11:03 pm

    Thank you very much! I hope I do. You submit too! Lets all go crazy and submit something. lol
    garudastorm
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    Post by garudastorm Thu Apr 04, 2013 7:50 am

    This is really good! Especially how you rhymed every other line... I forgot what that is called, but great job!
    nightwave19
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    Post by nightwave19 Thu Apr 04, 2013 9:26 am

    i would love to give it a try but for some reason my poetic skills seems to only come out when i want to describe nature or feelings.
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    Post by Edgar Amauri Sun Apr 07, 2013 10:34 am

    The poem is very good

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